Dear Santa,
Christmas is coming and it’s time for presents. As Santa you have the power to grant wishes for all the little kids of the world. It would brighten my Christmas day to find an NBA 2k11 video game for the Xbox 360 under my Christmas tree. It would be good for my cousin and I because it will strengthen our hand-eye coordination.
I currently have NBA 2k10 for my PSP but it freezes regularly. I will play it when I’m bored, I also play for a basketball team and enjoy playing as my favorite team. If you bring me this gift I will not play it all the time and still do my school work.I have no job seeing that I’m in 6th grade and no way of buying it myself. I have a lot of spare time on my hands because I don’t get much homework so, you’re gift will not be wasted. I will have fun playing it everyday. It will show me the rules and how I should play in my games.
Thank you for reading my letter.
From,
Moiz Manzoor
wow, moiz that was some pretty good stuff in their, I liked a lot. Well hopefully Santa brings you that game for your psp. One problem though your font is very dark so it was hard to read, but other than that you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteNice job moiz.I t was really good. You had some good things in your writing. I liked the game that you chose. My cousin has the game so I played it before. I hope Santa buys the game for you and especially for your Xbox 360 and not for your PSP. I think that every thing in your blog post was good except for your color of the words on your post. I think you should check your design thing because it has a color part on it. So it was really good like I said. Alright then, see you tomorrow in class!
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