I love Halloween. I love going into different neighborhoods and getting all the candy. Last year I got soda from one house. Every year my candy doesn't last very long because I go home and eat it all. Then I steal candy from what we were giving out and my little sister.
Moiz, this post is on topic, however it's EXTREMELY SHORT! I know that you can do much better and I expect to see so on your next post!! I hope that you had a great Halloween!
ReplyDeleteIt is a good thing that you stayed on topic, but no-offence, this is so short! You were doing good on the other topics, but what happened? It is like a balloon that just popped. I know that you can write a lot more than this. But you were on topic. I will give you a tip,though why don't you use a little ore describing and make the passage bigger. So far it was good!
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