Uniforms

Dear Dr. Richard O' Malley,


          "The unity of freedom has never relied on uniformity of opinion." (John F. Kennedy) Public schools grades K-12 are trying to enforce a school uniform policy. School uniforms are not beneficial to creativity or freedom of clothing. As long as no one wears anything inappropriate uniforms are not needed. One, if we have school uniforms everyone will have to wear the same thing. Two, a student wears what they want to express them self. Lastly, we students should get a say in this debate since this decision affects us not the administration.
          Wearing the same thing blocks individuality and creativity. If everyone wears the same thing there would be no enjoyment on seeing other people's clothes. Everyone has their own taste in clothing. "That isn't true" is what the opposition would say. They are wrong because it is true. It will take away the student's freedom to dress the way they want. Parents will have to buy uniforms plus other clothes for outside of school. Creativity should not be allowed to be taken away from anyone.
          Clothes let people express themselves. People wear what they feel. If someone is happy they wear bright colors. If someone is sad they wear cool colors. "Uniforms can help students express themselves." That is what the opposition. They are wrong because students are not wearing what they want. Forcing us students to wear what we don't want is not right.
          Students should get a say. Since this decision affects us students it is only fair to us we get a say. We don't know how the uniforms will look. "We'll get nice uniforms" is what the opposition would say. They would just say that so students don't argue. We should decide if we have to get uniforms or not.
          Uniforms are a bad idea.  We all have to wear the same thing. Students wear what they want to express themselves. This is a big decision and will affect us students not administration. Uniforms are not a good idea. Students and their parents will get angry because the students are forced to wear the uniforms and the parents will be force to spend their money to buy them. There should be a vote weather to get uniforms or not.

    
                                                                                                                            Sincerely,
                                                                                                                             Moiz Manzoor
                                                      

New York Knick Jerseys

New York Knick Jerseys

            The New York Knicks are the official basketball team of New York. Everyone knows New York. It is one of the most popular states in the USA. If you show my commercial during a Knicks game the viewers will pay more attention to it. The players wear these jerseys almost everyday.

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          Fans also wear jerseys to the games. Most Knick fans wear jerseys to the game. Every home about 85% of fans wear Knick jerseys. Wearing jerseys tell the players that you support them. By supporting the players it helps them gain momentum.

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          Buy your Knick jerseys today. They are sold anywhere that sells sporting equipment. Come see the Knicks play wearing the jerseys at Madison Square Garden, the world’s most famous arena.

Commercial

I liked doing this commercial. We got to do what adults do what we had fun doing and what we students might never get to do in our lifetimes. These commercials have helped me better understand hw to write a pursuasive essay. I have learned how to give a statistic, how to write claims, and how to use pursuasive techniques. I enjoyed getting to film the commercials with the partner that we got to pick ourselves. My partner was Jason and our commercial was about Griffins which are the shoes of Blake Griffin who almost all sportsfans know. We got to film it out of school which I liked the most.

New York Knick Jerseys

Dear MSG,

     You should display my commercial on your network because now the Knicks are amazing and everyone loves having Carmelo Anthony and Amar'e Stoudemire on their home team. The Knicks are becoming very popular and a lot of people are going to want to buy the player's jerseys. The Knicks play for New York and everyone knows that New York sports teams are always good and win championships. The Knicks are having an excellent season and are most likely going to make the playoffs and will get even more hype because there are going to be less teams playing.

Ad

During the Superbowl this year I saw one of my favorite commercials. It was an ad about snickers. It was around a minute but it still made me laugh. The commercial is about lumberjacks cutting down trees. One lumberjack is played as Betty White. In the ad Betty White is complaining that her back hurts  and another person insulted him by saying he's acting like Betty White. Then she says her back hurts and all of a sudden a huge log comes and knocks her to the ground in a pool of mud.Then she says "Now my front hurt." Then the guy who insults her says "Here eat a Snickers." She eats the Snickers bar a returns to her normal state as a man. They exchange betters and the commercial ends by showing a Snickers bar ripped in half.
I enjoyed watching this commercial because it was entertaining. It's not everyday you see an old lady get hit hard by a huge log. This commercial is really one people are going to rememberthroughout the future.

Ad

During the Superbowl this year I saw one of my favorite commercials. It was an ad about snickers. It was around a minute but it still made me laugh. The commercial is about lumberjacks cutting down trees. One lumberjack is played as Betty White. In the ad Betty White is complaining that her back hurts  and another person insulted him by saying he's acting like Betty White. Then she says her back hurts and all of a sudden a huge log comes and knocks her to the ground in a pool of mud.Then she says "Now my front hurt." Then the guy who insults her says "Here eat a Snickers." She eats the Snickers bar a returns to her normal state as a man. They exchange betters and the commercial ends by showing a Snickers bar ripped in half.
I enjoyed watching this commercial because it was entertaining. It's not everyday you see an old lady get hit hard by a huge log. This commercial is really one people are going to rememberthroughout the future.